Y6: Creative Narrative This task required me to improve my skill in writting the story. I can demonstrated that I have improved in this school wide learner goal by learn how to write the story that about rescues and don't keep exotic animals as a pet. Something I learned from this assignment is exotic animals is not a toy or a game to keep it and destroys there life. I tried to improve my story by writing these revision goals, this can help me fix mymixtake and do better nexttime. Goals I will change all the word to a highlevel like: i will change the word scare to afraid i will change the word thinking to wondering i will cange the word free to rescues One thing that was challenging was this is not an easy story we have to make up puur own story atleast 300 words and it could not be the same as the story online or they exist aready. I really enjoyed by change all the words to the higher levels because this help me improve my skill in writting Next time I would like to write longer and more interesting so when the reader read it they will say:"OMg this is the best story about the exotic animals that i've ever read".
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